Picture Story (ELA piece)

This was a story I wrote based on a set of slides shown in class. I tried to link them together and make them flow as best I could.. enjoy. :)

One mid summer day, a seemingly old hotel stood in a crowd of bushes and flowers. The garbage can covered in green. Everything about the hotel was green, except the windows and the main color.
A blond girl, with a brown mustache and goatee, make up splashed randomly on her face. She walked slowly towards the hotel, her hair flowing in the wind.
Her purse was filled with money, lots of money. As she walked into the hotel, all of the guys looked up and gazed at her.
One of the guys who had funky mustache and a blue – black hat walked to her. " Hey" he said. She replied " hey’.
The guy’s friend mumbled " Hi" blushing very obviously, he had a Mohawk and a guitar in his hand. "Lets hear you play" said the girl. "No" he said.
Days passed, and the three of them became very good friends and decided to go back to the girls house. Her house was very far, overseas, so they had to board a stinky plane.
After a while, when they were on the plane she got very thirsty and asked for water, but the flight attendant would not come out or pay attention to her. Finally, two flight attendants came out and greeted each other with their secret handshake.
"Oy!! get me some water" she yelled to the flight attendant. "Coming up" replied one of them. As she drank the water, she started to choke, and fell to the floor of the plane. One of the passengers said "I am a doctor" and ran towards her but it was too late. He shook his head and placed his finger on her neck.
The next day at her funeral, was a perfect day, the sun was out, the clouds high in the sky. Too bad something that horrible happened on such a good day.